I am from hugs, kisses and lots of love.
I am from the BIG white house on the hill
I am from the tulips, and the lilies
I am from scholars and Fashionistas
From Susan,John and Pammy
I am from asthma pumps and allergy medicine
From "look both ways before you cross the street" and "no you can not trade your brother for a sister"
I am from i can do all things through Christ who strengthens me
I am from right here
Chocolate chip cookies and milk
From hats, purses, and lots of high heels
I'm from pageant princesses and Marines
From Big Mouths and Know-it-alls
From straight teeth and eyeglasses
I'm from Dreams that become a reality
each and everyday
I'm from the shelves with the photo albums
that stop time
and allow me to re-live the most precious moments in my life
Sade.
4 comments:
I like your piece. My favorite line is I'm from dreams that become a reality each and every day. One line that I can relate to is I'm from the tulips and the lilies. I have a lot of these flowers around my house. Good job on your piece.
Hi... The lines that i like the most in o your poem is when you say " I am from Dreams that become reality each and everyday." I like that because my parents are always telling me to fallow my dreams and they will come true and when you said that i felt that you have your dreams in your reach and you are not going to let them slip away.
I also like "I am from the shelves with the photo albums that stop time and allow me to re-live the most precious moments in my life" Those line really stand out to me.
Your poem was very good and we had many things in common with each other.
hi, thank for your comments. i really appreciate the feedback.
to Jordyn: yea, my mom is like crazy about flowers she loves them. especially tulips and lilies we have like every color ugh, they make me sneeze.
to Jessica: thanks again for your comment. my mommy is constantly telling me to follow my dreams and to not let them slip away. so i try to achieve all that i can everyday to help me get closer to my dreams.and yea we have so many photo albums at my house its crazy. im like mom you dont have to take a picture everytime we do something.lolz
Thumbs up ;)
Love line 9.
Line 6 = funny :P
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