The places music can take you.
The sky in the spring when the clouds are nearly blue.
The Christmas Blessing that tore us apart.
The way love can fix a broken heart.
It may take a while......
Different dreams can seem to make the unwanted smile.
Don't give up.
"The sun lights up a drop of dew
The drop of dew soon dries
You are the light of my eyes my eyes
I'm brought to life by you..."
-By: Kaelyn
1 comment:
this piece describes our differences as a group as it displays the wide variety of observations. however, it displays our similarites as groups and individuals because this same variety can be linked as one. i feel that this piece overcomes stereotypes in the sense that it sets asides differences and makes them known because to me, the piece has an underlying imagery. the borrowed words and phrases create a unified fluid piece because not only does it have a rhyming composition, it has a solid idea that genuinely reflects its author. this piece is profound in the sense that the words were not created in the author's head but found in the works of others and composed to support and idea, and a powerful one at that.
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