The beautiful lyrics to my favorite song
The most beautiful things in life go unnoticed
The pain that once seemed endless has faded
How awesome my dad truly is and how much I love him
Some small things may be heavier than they look
The many lies covering up the truth
Kids in drama creating their own
How my laptop gets very hot
The noises my house makes when I'm home alone
by Valerie
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Your piece doesn't show many how we are different groups. Everything you said happens all around the world and how everything ties together. Lying is probably the stereotype that a lot of people have. But in yours I believe that you are trying to show people that it is not right. I love how you rearranged your piece. It seems like you just picked out the most important or things you see everyday and just wrote them down and that to me is the best way to write poems like this. Valerie, everything you said in yours is true for me esp when you said how awesome my dad truly is and how much I love him, that is 100% true for me.
Not too much is different from what goes on here. Some of our similarities are our houses when were home alone, our favorite songs, and our parents. It over comes the stereotype I had because after reading this piece I feel like we are exactly alike. The phrases you chose created a fluid because because you talked about things in you're life that are true. The other impressions I have of this piece are that you are an open person because you talk about what you feel.
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