my room is really messy.
time goes by way too fast.
music makes people happier.
peope take their lives for granted.
our economy is horrible.
people in high school have very little concern about others emotions.
there is a fine like between a good friend and a good friend you truly trust.
Alyssa
1 comment:
To be honest your piece does not say anything about who we are as different groups.Your piece does say some similarities and one of them is how you said our economy is horrible that is a similarity.To be honest i really don't think your piece overcome any stereotype.the piece you wrote does have some borrowed words in it and some of them are time goes by way to fast.I think that you piece is really well written. It was good
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