Life seems different during the four seasons,
The way the trees denature into an old fence from a storm.
A park bench deformed from rain, aging.
The patches of dark green grass.
The ocean during the mid summer night.
The forward motion when the warm wind runs through your hair.
Lights that tower over the streets and light them up at night.
Sneaky out late, hoping fate doesn’t interfere.
The midst of spring, of a bird chirping a song,
Different colors of the sky through out the day.
Hoping May will bring flowers so the small hours in the day pray to last longer.
The first day of High school, to the last day fly’s by.
The slamming of lockers in the morning warning that too much homework will come during each array.
How life can seem the same everyday, but it’s a different date.
How all teenagers seem different but can convey the same
Feeling’s for that one future day.
-Monica
3 comments:
1.I don't find anything that is different between our groups from the poem.
2.The similarities are both groups notice the changes in nature and changes around us.
3.A stereotype that I had was that you guys wouldn't notice the changes in the seasons as well as we would but I am proved wrong.
4.The borrowed phrases come together to form a poem about the seasons, weather, plants, and birds. You really put the poem together just right and it really sounds that you wrote it out of your thoughts.
5.I really like that you had about the same phrases or sentences and they were put together really well.
Rebekah J.
BEAST!!!!!!!! AT WRITING
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