my room is really messy.
time goes by way too fast.
music makes people happier.
peope take their lives for granted.
our economy is horrible.
people in high school have very little concern about others emotions.
there is a fine like between a good friend and a good friend you truly trust.
by Alyssa
2 comments:
1) It says that we are still very similar. there is always going to be drama, no matter where you live, big city, or a little town.
2) The economy is horrible, i think that is the only thing that anyone at our school can agree on.
3) There should not be any stereotypes. we are all just kids who live where our parents make us. We are who we are, there are stuck up rich people in Nebraska to.
4) Since we all share so much, or have so much in common, we are better able to put together a poem because. Great minds think alike.
5) The other comments that I have are that me room is messy also. And music makes me happy.
Alyssa I seriously don't see any differences in your piece. All of yours show the same thing that happens here to. People having little concern about others is a stereotype that I knew a lot of people who thought of it and yours overcomes it by in yours I could feel where your coming from. Most people think that since they are different they don't have the same emotions that we do. Yours flows very well together. It goes together so well and it also made me want to keep reading it. Another comment I would like to let you know about is that when you said that there is a fine like between a good friend and a good friend that you truly trust, I know how that feels because I go through that so many times a day.
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